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本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2011-4-14 08:58 编辑谢谢 楼主坚持在这个贴里写日记吧。。。今天没红包了，明天补 楼主坚持在这个贴里写日记吧。。。今天没红包了，明天补
程普 发表于 2009-8-4 00:10 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
OK.Thank you for your encouragement.{:4_295:} Tomorrow evening,
I am going to attend somebody's birthday party.
I feel so bored,
I don't want to go at all,
because I knew none of them,
even the birthday person.
But,I must attend,
becaus ...
learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-3 23:55 http://dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Great! It's an effective way to practice and improve English.{:5_358:}
If you have to attend the party, just try to enjoy it as much as you can.{:5_363:}
I wish you an agreeable birthday party.{:5_325:} {:5_363:}英语都真好
虽然我看懂了
Great! It's an effective way to practice and improve English.{:5_358:}
If you have to attend the party, just try to enjoy it as much as you can.{:5_363:}
I wish you an agreeable birthday p ...
吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-8-4 00:48 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Thanks for your wishes.
I'll try to enjoy it. {:5_363:}英语都真好
juttazhu 发表于 2009-8-4 06:25 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Can I take it as it's ironic?{:4_282:} But,I must attend,
because the birthday person invited me via my friend,
and he is a important person for me.
learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-3 23:55 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
better:
but i have to attend it, because the birthday child has invited me through an important friend of mine.
better:
but i have to attend it, because the birthday child has invited me through an important friend of mine.
多小米 发表于 2009-8-4 13:09 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
maybe she meant that her friend is important for her????
maybe she meant that her friend is important for her????
四线方格 发表于 2009-8-4 13:18 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
yep, so what's the difference?
i think,"a friend who is important for me" is equal to "an important friend of mine"...{:5_367:} 本帖最后由 mayjiay28 于 2009-8-4 13:54 编辑
ha! important person for me....
how "important"{:5_387:}
sounds like potential bf...{:5_347:} 本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2009-8-4 14:37 编辑
Thanks for 小米and方格's help.
I meant that birthday man is important person for me.
Of course,my friend is more important than him.
Thank 小米and方格 again. 本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2010-3-18 04:45 编辑
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yep, so what's the difference?
i think,"a friend who is important for me" is equal to "an important friend of mine"...{:5_367:}
多小米 发表于 2009-8-4 13:30 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
sorry, my mistake. My cellphone is very strange,
when it is in turn-off mode,
the alarm clock in it still works.
Last night,I have already turned the cellphone off,
but this morning,at eight o'clock,
it rang.
...
learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-4 14:31 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Could u please tell me how old u r? 本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2009-8-20 20:39 编辑
Could u please tell me how old u r?
四线方格 发表于 2009-8-4 21:37 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Do you ask me this question because you saw that I have written about using a pink phone?
Actually,it's the color of the rose.
I wrote"pink/purplish/reddsh",because I didn't know how to describe that color.
Indeed,black and white etc.,these color can give girls a mature look,
but,sometimes,these mature color with some rose color will be ok,too.
because that way will make you look more pleasant. It is not a bug but a function to alarm even when mobile is off.
As usual, user could find an option in alarm settings to disable this function.
patton 发表于 2009-8-4 15:03 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
I see.Thanks{:4_295:} ha! important person for me....
how "important"{:5_387:}
sounds like potential bf...{:5_347:}
mayjiay28 发表于 2009-8-4 13:52 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Actually,he is my hero{:4_295:}
Do you ask me this problem because you saw I wrote I used the pink phone?
Actually,it's the color of the rose.
I wrote"pink/purplish/reddsh",because I didn't know how to describe that color.
...
learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-5 11:41 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
I apologize if that question bothers u.
I just thougt u r very very cute. Maybe because of ur age? 本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2010-3-18 04:45 编辑
/// LZ., good job!
I just doubt if sometimes you use more commas than necessary. For example, before OR and after BUT you do not need have a comma. good to learn the different culture~ look forward to ur diary 2morrow LZ., good job!
I just doubt if sometimes you use more commas than necessary. For example, before OR and after BUT you do not need have a comma.
lingling 发表于 2009-8-6 17:09 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Thanks.I have just edited it.{:5_359:} good to learn the different culture~ look forward to ur diary 2morrow
mayjiay28 发表于 2009-8-6 17:42 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Thanks for your encouragement{:5_359:} Thanks for 小米and方格's help.
I meant that birthday man is important person for me.
Of course,my friend is more important than him.
Thank 小米and方格 again.
learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-4 14:25 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
birthday boy 比较常说的。 17# learnEnglish
Do you ask me this problem because。。
人可以ask question 也可以cause problem..通常不ask problem, 除非 ask for problem.. 21# learnEnglish
亲，有几条我就一起说啦
1. 关于 too tired but happy
这个汉语里的非常 直接换用 too 不太合适，因为too有导出下文否定含义的功能。。
另外这句话和下句直接最好用连词，比如表原因的，串成一句。不然整篇都是简单句的罗列，会觉得单调。
2. 关于牛羊肉，那个宰杀的动词应该和有生命的名词搭配使用，已经成了肉就不用杀了。。
3. In other words, Muslims don't eat non-halal-meat, either.
这个句子很好， 但是这个either 离前一个否定结构太远了， 读者未必能跟上亲的思路。。
4. brought some halal-beef and halal-chicken for himself.
这句话里用 bring along sth. with sb. 比较好。。 17# learnEnglish
Do you ask me this problem because。。
人可以ask question 也可以cause problem..通常不ask problem, 除非 ask for problem..
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 01:44 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Thank you very very much{:5_391:}
(Did you ask me this question because you had seen I had written "I am using the pink phone"?) 本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2009-8-8 04:44 编辑
21# learnEnglish
亲，有几条我就一起说啦
1. 关于 too tired but happy
这个汉语里的非常 直接换用 too 不太合适，因为too有导出下文否定含义的功能。。
另外这句话和下句直接最好用连词，比如表原因的，串 ...
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 01:59 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Thanks{:5_315:} {:5_315:} {:5_315:}
I edited (1), thank 咖啡{:5_341:}
(2)(3) don't know how to edit...
(4)I want to emphasize "for himself", not "for others"... 本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2010-3-18 04:46 编辑
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