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just something off the top of my head:
9 ]* [( f0 J' w; P! k/ N. open up sth pertinent to the statement in the topic, about property of laws/ morality is the supporting item
. avoid using "completely". this sets a sharp co ...
) p0 Y( s- N1 `4 b: n/ `Chris81 发表于 2009-9-13 23:09

thx for your comments
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flexibility 是要考虑circumstance  不就是要及时不断修改low吗？
结构我觉得也很清晰啊
morality我是想说不fair，太主观了

吃花生的大灰狼

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For your reference:
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9 s$ _* j. g! s& m  I/ CIt has been widely recognized that laws could never be complete, even if they are amended frequently since future is not predictable.

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For your reference:
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It has been widely recognized that laws could never be complete, even if they are amended frequently since future is not predictable.

This is why institutions are essential.
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我没说laws complete了呀。

吃花生的大灰狼

我没说laws complete了呀。
1 }7 z/ N- c2 \$ z8 I1 T2 mAnonymous 发表于 2009-9-14 00:01

( i: @# F" W; f0 k0 c1 f0 DNo.
1 F( E; w  ^" H  o$ hIt's just for your reference since you mentioned the adaptability of the law to circumstances.

No.
It's just for your reference since you mentioned the adaptability of the law to circumstances.
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最后一次顶贴 看有没有人来拍

karlfriedrich

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" i! A* `. s. p1 ^4 k: ?" _- }1 n+ Twhen one of them is not functioning, we could still resort the other one.
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7 I* U4 w* b4 H( r: ?- xI would say: when one of them does not work/function, we could resort to the other (one).

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7 z* `$ b$ J3 t/ t4 @吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-13 20:53

agree with u
besides
4 F. R! d8 V% p( n% M" n) h/ VBut despite all that, we have to notice the circumstances are persistently altering, so do the minds of people

for the above, I would like say
2 O) I: {" T- |+ c! j0 k+ xbut despite of that, we have to....

agree with u
besides
8 q. f  b. F* y0 X0 S, d6 W# UBut despite all that, we have to notice the circumstances are persistently altering, so do the minds of people
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for the above, I would like say
but despite of that, we have ...
0 D% R  G! k8 ckarlfriedrich 发表于 2009-9-15 23:35

karlfriedrich

suggestions for a writting in a examination.
1.structure is very very important. usually, a article is made up of 4 paragraphes. one of them is conclusion.the other three are supporting points.
2.examples or metaphor is a useful skill
2 c! |  f, U8 _3.the american do not like the saying: a coin has two sides. for them, either true or false, either good or bad.
/ b$ P& a. r0 w; O/ q: \) P2 L. ]& Qjust suggestions for the examination.

suggestions for a writting in a examination.
& i* S- G- E. O# X9 M1.structure is very very important. usually, a article is made up of 4 paragraphes. one of them is conclusion.the other three are supporting points.
2.e ...
. d/ D# _. f' U7 [0 fkarlfriedrich 发表于 2009-9-15 23:48

thx