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So, you'd better rephrase them.
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I am uncomfortable with
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0 t' [% l* C' X# c"the laws became so flexible that they were keen to "
"the problem ... with executability"
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Of course, I am not a native speaker.
吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-16 13:05

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" ], G* }, N% y你是说就keen用的不好
还是"in case that..., then"
"the laws became so flexible that they were keen to "
"the problem ... with executability"这3个都不好

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5 P5 T6 Q! o+ l8 N; [) ]; jkeen我改成tend to了，你觉得怎么样

吃花生的大灰狼

因为我的确不重视冠词的使用  用法也不一定清楚
4 V/ H  O; N' X3 a5 m. k" f  E冠词在我文章中都是爱写不写的
既然那人这么热心帮我指出来
我就改改吧

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2 d2 I+ d# d1 m6 e7 ZAnonymous 发表于 2009-9-16 12:56

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I am not sure. If I were you, I would use "the" in place of "a".

吃花生的大灰狼

你是说就keen用的不好
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$ L0 z5 M4 B2 k+ o+ E# f( D"the problem ... with executability"这3个都不好
1 w$ _. O7 B- j- k$ SAnonymous 发表于 2009-9-16 13:11

All those three points make me confused.

吃花生的大灰狼

By the way, I think it should be "adapt to sth"

By the way, I think it should be "adapt to sth"
吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-16 13:17

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