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我们由于从前在学校里学习英语时老师们过份的强调了从句的作用,让好多同学们常常把but, if, although , even though, so…that, in order to之类的词用了个透。这些词不是说不能用,只是说如果你有更多更好的写法与代替方法,则应该考虑更其它。其实好多人以为英语写作或者英语的文章无非就是这些几个词语,外加一堆生词堆砌,这是误解。英语写得好的人,简单的词语排列组合时,采用长句,短句相结合的写法,完全可以避免掉这些口语中出现最多的从句。4 f0 w" s& J/ N8 e
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在这里我想写一点代替的写法,希望对大家英语写作有所提高与见识。同样还是留点作业给大家,请积极试写。" G4 e/ \5 }3 M3 z+ R6 P+ E
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But
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我们比较喜欢BUT,因为它短小又容易用。如果要避免它,请换个思维来改变你的句子,下面是几个例子,当然改变的方法非常多,不要只局限于以下几种方法。
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1) The classroom was silent, but suddenly a girl started to cry2 t* q) C( ?3 x: ]' @$ E* F5 W, s
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Change : The silence of the classroom was broken by a girl´s cry.
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" Y( }) N* f- E( C1 I2 _2) It was meant to be a wonderful day but it turned out to be a disaster.
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B; C. f% @2 [4 ^+ j" t6 bChange: What was meant to be a wonderful afternoon turned out to be a disaster.
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3) The movie “The Sound of Music” is about a big family , but it is more than just that
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& j& v& E+ o' i4 W4) It is not his method but his attitude that holds him from becoming successful* M+ \8 O" t7 [
3 g; x1 z7 Y! v9 wChange: His attitude, not his method, holds him from becoming successful
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) U) x7 @# V* O; ~$ N' @5) I feel extremely tired and want nothing but a meal and a bed.
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+ _8 x( Y2 S( R" z1) All students want to go there, but she does not want to do so.
" H$ E+ _% R% ]8 [/ G2) We have various kinds of food to stay healthy, but the most basic are carbohydrates, fats, and proteins.9 D8 [9 {! H% C5 J1 T( x
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还有其它几个从句词比较although 等,我后面慢慢写来。欢迎大家都积极帮助我搜集材料或者提供不同意见! |
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