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我们由于从前在学校里学习英语时老师们过份的强调了从句的作用,让好多同学们常常把but, if, although , even though, so…that, in order to之类的词用了个透。这些词不是说不能用,只是说如果你有更多更好的写法与代替方法,则应该考虑更其它。其实好多人以为英语写作或者英语的文章无非就是这些几个词语,外加一堆生词堆砌,这是误解。英语写得好的人,简单的词语排列组合时,采用长句,短句相结合的写法,完全可以避免掉这些口语中出现最多的从句。
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! G3 ~3 C, ?6 x( }: N" J; h0 _在这里我想写一点代替的写法,希望对大家英语写作有所提高与见识。同样还是留点作业给大家,请积极试写。
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/ g( @9 m1 \0 ^4 q' o! e我们比较喜欢BUT,因为它短小又容易用。如果要避免它,请换个思维来改变你的句子,下面是几个例子,当然改变的方法非常多,不要只局限于以下几种方法。* x2 U$ \6 B9 v8 z2 p5 \+ Z% _: d
5 W6 C. a% G- |) q9 p8 h) Z& Q1) The classroom was silent, but suddenly a girl started to cry
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Change : The silence of the classroom was broken by a girl´s cry.
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2) It was meant to be a wonderful day but it turned out to be a disaster. O: m' p# v; J' ]. J. w
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, Z( T& ^) e: X3) The movie “The Sound of Music” is about a big family , but it is more than just that
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4) It is not his method but his attitude that holds him from becoming successful$ V. I0 Q7 z% }) N
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5) I feel extremely tired and want nothing but a meal and a bed.
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Change: I feel extremely tired and want only two things: a meal and a bed. 4 a( F5 f0 ?- g, c8 P/ y
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* D4 E1 e: J6 \8 `6 s9 h1) All students want to go there, but she does not want to do so.
& t, g8 r% _: L E& O! }2) We have various kinds of food to stay healthy, but the most basic are carbohydrates, fats, and proteins.. \$ Q' }1 `, E7 X$ @6 l
" G$ `* a0 n; K7 S还有其它几个从句词比较although 等,我后面慢慢写来。欢迎大家都积极帮助我搜集材料或者提供不同意见! |
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