需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！
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( ~; g, Z! A5 _, ?5 GDaisy is getting up at 6.30h.
And she sees her cat first.
She goes to thestation by car.
% e- b& {+ F5 l9 }9 OAt 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
She is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
And a friend waits for Daisy.
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; D4 ?, v8 M0 \/ r  |Then ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

# ^- D; N9 P; G+ dDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
9 |& |0 W; F( m& {She sees her cat first.
* |: V  P/ \3 q8 HThen, she goes to the station by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads newspaper.
- A* X5 d; E' g: ]& w9 l1 j" u2 G7 RShe arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
There a friend was waiting for her.
2 E7 ~& ^' n- Z# t2 [' @. K0 YAsk eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
! b8 [0 B- o  S* n. h( p3 a2 HThen ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
; K- w3 k" ?. SThen ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

* C, J3 [/ K2 Q# l最后几句也搞不清。试试。
The friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
9 Q  i. ~  d3 E1 B0 K/ oThen they went shopping.
* k5 E. q: m, {3 R& ?6 tAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

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Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
  v& g! D3 m/ f' w* `At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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最后几句也搞不清。 ...
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She see ...
foxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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  Q, g1 L! _; l$ l9 i& r: D& |    Danke schoen!