需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！

Daisy is getting up at 6.30h.
9 @! J) b- |, z2 b5 mAnd she sees her cat first.
9 k4 n' {$ s( @  R5 b  f* f$ XShe goes to thestation by car.
2 Y( W1 T; X" V3 P( AAt 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
" q- N0 q% x9 n$ g" \6 p9 p/ f9 LShe is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
And a friend waits for Daisy.
5 Z: q1 Y4 \' E. wAsk eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
& q+ M* K  C! s5 B" k) k9 n+ IAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
- ]/ e" L' Z1 N) a; L1 |She sees her cat first.
Then, she goes to the station by car.
$ R1 x# |) U6 [0 X' ?* EAt 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads newspaper.
0 D) h* [% d. k6 E5 m5 mShe arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
2 T( M+ X) `. G% SThere a friend was waiting for her.
Ask eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
- j% X6 G- [" R, Y+ |Then ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
) [+ g8 J  `. XAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
0 x6 K( f* A- V* e" ~5 K# SAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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' I/ b! {$ Q% \! f) c4 _2 X最后几句也搞不清。试试。
The friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
: F9 k' m9 K! _Then they went shopping.
2 T0 w5 \- G( R8 d4 y8 BAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

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Ask eats in a china resteron.
: {( G5 x# V5 G+ \8 l+ L+ v  TThen ask shopps.
" l2 E. M$ }1 w9 ]. qAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

最后几句也搞不清。 ...
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
6 H" ~3 ~4 B3 u9 }She see ...
- e+ [3 n- }  v6 z5 ]& f& jfoxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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