各位英文高手，帮我看看这些句子中用has对吗？

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1.it （restaurant）has chinese food .
2....beer  has many  sugar and fat
3. (beer) it has less vegetable and fiber than...
; d8 G+ J7 k! D4 V7 _1 Z& V- d, I) L  V0 u4.this forest has many animals.
5.the second floor has many things
注：这是从中国中学生的语料库中找到的，我知道用there be句型更好，但请问这些地方用has对吗？

handada

好像都对， 我４级没过

conkydlcmacro

都对，都是Chinglish

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既然是chinglish，那就是说不对了？

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handada 发表于 2012-6-27 18:09
8 U3 m8 j3 I8 P' b1 z( k3 y好像都对， 我４级没过

汗哒哒，我抱着你一起哭吧

黑妹威武

从语法上来说是没有错的，但是一般情况不会这么boring.
1.it （restaurant）has chinese food .- The restaurant offers Chinese food.
( V1 ?2 k0 E  |1 ^/ w$ x' {: f2....beer  has many  sugar and fat; -- Beer contains many sugar and fat.
, x1 c- r  M; Q3. (beer) it has less vegetable and fiber than....—there are (way) less vegetable and fiber in beer than…
; r5 Z! V3 e. t" ]5 @) I4.this forest has many animals.—There are many animals in this forest.
5.the second floor has many things—There are plenty of stuff on the second floor.
' N* \+ N# x/ l2 b对不起，我连句子都改了。。。sorry.
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黑妹威武 发表于 2012-6-27 20:27
从语法上来说是没有错的，但是一般情况不会这么boring.
1.it （restaurant）has chinese food .- The rest ...

! i5 C% W8 Q, U& t多谢多谢！

daydayup009

1.it serves chinese food,
" Q% U: i% Y, a. \2.the beer contains (some/little/too much)sugar and fat.
7 I: h/ L# Z7 R: v, W8 n; v2 b5 C4.this forest is the home of many animals.
( j  k9 [' J# _: b; ]5.There are many things on the second floor. or it houses many things.
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我个人认为这样更好。个人认为原句基本都是错的。但是这个还是要native speaker 看一下才能确定。

icebear18

哇，好中国化的英语
+ f# A5 `  Z( f, s) X% S* F不需要用has的，有更自然的说法

我是杰西卡

最好用there be句型吧
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JB2010

many fat and sugar?????? 建议楼主把基础的再学下。多找人说说，找找英语的感觉。加油