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mwa

原帖由 2ma31551 于 2008-8-18 14:21 发表
我在一家小公司做DA，之前的工作老板也都基本满意，谈起以后留下来上班的事，老板也说等我答辩完再谈谈工资待遇。

上星期五我把写完的报告交给老板了，他是我的BETREUER，要在交给教授之前看一遍，结果就非常的可 ...

勉强改了几句　实在改不下去了　完全没有语法和用词啊
With the objective of the European Union, the share of biofuels in the market to increase the use of biodiesel and biodiesel blends more and more important.
Under the goals/XXXX of the European Union the usage of biofuels in the market will get more and more important.

Of great interest are those of diesel fuel differing characteristics of biodiesel and biodiesel blends as well as the technical adjustments to the engine and exhaust after treatment systems.

At very big interest some characteristics in biodiesel and biodiesel, which are differ from that in  diesel fuel,  gets as well as that in  some technical areas ' experiment such as the engine and exhaust...XXXXX.


As part of this work insight on current investigations on the use of biodiesel fuel be given. The main mission of the Raw behaviour and Auswirke to exhaust after treatment in the use of biodiesel blends.

As one part of this work we will give some result on above mentioned investigations by the usage of biodiesel fuel. The main task of the Raw(original?....) behaviour and Auswirke to exhaust after treatment in the use of biodiesel blends.

MM的英文真的实在差啊．．．．．你最好把中文意思给大家　我都猜不出来了．．．:( 不好意思


The investigations were carried out influences of biodiesel share of the soot emission, the NOx Rohe Mission and the Zündverhalten from active regenerienden exhaust after treatment systems must be established. A higher proportion of biodiesel will tend to increase the NOx raw emissions and consumption while the PM emissions. The states of ATS require the influence of biodiesel additional share. The ignition of new ATS is significantly lower than those for aged ATS. The work shown in the results, it is possible to control devices by the self-recognition of the getankten to biodiesel blends.
Where specific fuel-engine optimization and after. Development of after-treatment technologies for the use of biodiesel and biodiesel blends, according to current knowledge, no exhaust emission substantially worse behaviour of biodiesel or biodiesel blends in comparison to conventional diesel fuel to be expected

mwa

我继续改一下　然后看意思能不能理顺一点

2ma31551

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[ 本帖最后由 2ma31551 于 2008-9-6 23:37 编辑 ]

趴趴

原帖由 2ma31551 于 2008-8-18 19:21 发表

在这个版块发吗？可以啊，谁愿意来帮我改，当然是改的很有水平，我可以付酬劳啊。。。

这里不知道可不可以发，但是有好多改论文的广告，嫰发这种应该也行吧，发英语那里也成啊
希望碰到高手尽快解决问题$m15$

mwa

The investigations were carried out influences of biodiesel share of the soot emission, the NOx Rohe Mission and the Zündverhalten from active regenerienden exhaust after treatment systems must be established.

In order the investigations of the influences of biodiesel share of the soot emission were carried out,
the NOx Rohe Mission and the Zündverhalten from active regenerienden exhaust after treatment systems must be established.

A higher proportion of biodiesel will tend to increase the NOx raw emissions and consumption while the PM emissions.

The higher ratio of biodiesel will tend to increase the NOx raw emissions and consumption during the PM emissions.

The states of ATS require the influence of biodiesel additional share. The ignition of new ATS is significantly lower than those for aged ATS. The work shown in the results, it is possible to control devices by the self-recognition of the getankten to biodiesel blends.

The states of ATS require the influence of biodiesel additional share. The ignition of new ATS is significantly lower than those for aged ATS. This work is shown in the result, which is possible to control devices by the self-recognition of the getankten to biodiesel blends.

Where specific fuel-engine optimization and after. Development of after-treatment technologies for the use of biodiesel and biodiesel blends, according to current knowledge, no exhaust emission substantially worse behaviour of biodiesel or biodiesel blends in comparison to conventional diesel fuel to be expected

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真的搞不定了啊　专业我不懂　内容我也不懂:)

mwa

我觉得德语写的很好啊　至少以偶的比较差的书面德语水平看　还可以
ZIELSETZUNG好象比VORGABE强吧

Ximigo

这英语确实问题比较大，看了第一句我就看不下去了.....
工作板上有人花钱帮你修论文的，估计那个应该不错。

对老板的问题，老外不喜欢你找借口，这次没做好认真认错就好了，然后后面就一定要做出成绩来，这样他才会另眼看你，而且很快会忘记你这次的弱。

软软熊

求人不如自己动手,这里人给你改了,你东拼西凑的,人读起来也别扭.
语句组织就不说了,最起码你交出去之前也看看语法,拼写之类.最简单的办法就是放在word里用英语语法检查一下.

c76de

德文的写得很好啊，难道你老板还认为是很差？

orionsnow

估计这个已经是老板改过的了