想认识一些热爱英语的朋友

saint_para · 发表于 2009-6-18 09:44

I guess she wanted to say that " I will make a progess with my persistence" or " My english will be improved if I am persistent"
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VinniDoll 发表于 2009-6-17 18:54

then which word would you suggest that would be proper in the context?

mentos · 发表于 2009-6-18 10:03

Thank you guys very much! That is what I wanted to say. I felt a little bit shame on me as I read your corrections.

. But just because I am so bad at English, so I have to learn it. Thank your again for your help.
I am going to watch CNN News today and try to write sth about it.

I guess she wanted to say that " I will make a progess with my persistence" or " My english will be improved if I am persistent"
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VinniDoll 发表于 2009-6-17 18:54

saint_para · 发表于 2009-6-18 10:12

本帖最后由 saint_para 于 2009-6-18 11:22 编辑

hello, everyone!

I'm excited to see this interesting post and would like to be in. After lurking for so long, now just decided to "bump" again

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Firstly, a short self-introduction , maybe.....I'm now studying Business Administration (BWL, Diplom, like many chinese people do here:)) specializing in Finance and Controlling. During my bechalor study, however, i majored in international Economy and Trade. Now i've been almost three and a half years in Germany. Just in last month i handed in my final thesis and expect to get the diploma soonly.
Since the most lectures at the university are given in German, my english has been getting worse and worse. Ich hope that all the good english-speakers around here would inspire me again to pick up my english.

I will drop by down here every day and at last wish you all have a nice day though!

michaellord110 · 发表于 2009-6-18 13:31

Thank you guys very much! That is what I wanted to say. I felt a little bit shame on me as I read your corrections. . But just because I am so bad at English, so I have to learn it. Thank yo ...( o: Y- e6 E( ~+ O# Z
mentos 发表于 2009-6-18 11:03

Great. Welcome on board! Just form a good learning habit and adhere to it. You would get your English improved soon. There is nothing to be ashamed of. Everybody makes mistakes, that's why we keep practising it.

michaellord110 · 发表于 2009-6-18 13:34

How does that help my English
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To some extent. It helps you to improve English and German at the same time, although not as fast as when you focus on one particular language.

michaellord110 · 发表于 2009-6-18 13:45

本帖最后由 michaellord110 于 2009-6-18 14:46 编辑

hello, everyone!( z; y" L" j% N( g/ m

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Welcome! That's already a good start. Nice to meet you.
There're some minor mistakes though. You may express it this way: After being hiden for so long, I finally decided to show up again. Just last week I handed in my final thesis and am expecting to get my dimploma soon. "course" is a better word than “lecture", and "to brush up my English" is the proper expression.

saint_para · 发表于 2009-6-18 15:05

Welcome! That's already a good start. Nice to meet you., i& K5 ?) I/ }0 B: R8 W |
There're some minor mistakes though. You may express it this way: After being hiden for so long, I finally decided to show up again. Just la ...( t8 e& I- w& a& A( J
michaellord110 发表于 2009-6-18 14:45

thanks a lot:)

mentos · 发表于 2009-6-19 08:21

I watched CNN news yesterday. But I couldn't even catch the exact meaning of a several-seconds news. There were some words hurdled me.
It was about the recent air crash happened on its way from Brazil to France. More than 400 pieces of fragments of the air plane and around 50 of corpses were found.
Then it was further reported about some Brazil offical Information. That was the part that I totally did not understand.

michaellord110 · 发表于 2009-6-20 19:24

Generally well written. But the use of the word "hurdle" is inproper here. You may write: There are some words standing in my way of understanding. or There are some words disturbing/hindering/obstructing my understanding.

michaellord110 · 发表于 2009-6-20 19:42

Latest news about the turmoil in Iran.
Yesterday Iranian supreme religious leader address his people and verified the victory of the president. He proclaimed that the gap of votes between the newly elected president and the opposition cadidate was too vast to enable manipulation and fraud. He also called for theo pposition supporters to dismiss the rally.
The supreme leader has been holding the power for two decades, who is the commander in chief, in hold of judicial power and entitled to dismiss the president. Acctually the Iranian president is just in the third place on the power chain, after the supreme leader and guardian council. The main role played by the president is to represent his country in face of foreign affairs.

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