的确语法错误很多。。。。的 中式英语
德国人做事目的性超强，跟他们Schriftverkehr, 尽量做到语句简洁，意思明了(eindeutig,nicht mehrdeutig),
Aquaspirit 发表于 2013-3-9 13:08 static/image/common/back.gif
You have been her supervisor and we have no power to tell you what you should do or shouldn’t. But ...
{:5_336:}感叹你的学术精神，真的一句句都读啦
很急躁；不明智
fyi 发表于 2013-3-8 21:03 static/image/common/back.gif
把字体变小：ctrl 加上减号或者鼠标中键滚动。
就可以全进去了。。。你太阴险了，这不成了我在截屏吗。。 ...
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Aquaspirit 发表于 2013-3-9 12:55 static/image/common/back.gif
Of course she showed me the reference letter you have prepared for her and – very honestly – I was ...
这段实在太欢乐了{:5_319:}
代写这封信是否恰当姑且不论，语法错误也不提，单就内容而言，三分之一的篇幅就足够把意思表达清楚了吧……
都说国人最拿手的是冷嘲热讽，今天再次见识了。从这封信口气上来讲，没有大的出格处。英语环境下正常问题讨论时比这攻击性大的多的是，都是对事不对人。还乐此不疲，也没见人因此互骂起来，有兴趣可以多上英语技术论坛逛逛。语法也是一样，技术讨论讲究通俗易懂，实际生活中更是简单直了，不明白个别学了几年英语靠英语干了几件自认为成功的事的就有资格在这里笑话别人差了？真牛逼拉出来遛遛？如果楼主的行为于个人人身没有直接危害的话，那么各位这就是在败自己的人品啊。欢迎继续
And Y stayed also long hours into the office to finish her work. But the reference letter says nothing about this and this stays completely unrewarded.
这个我的理解就是你老婆加班是为了完成她的工作。。然后你认为这个是好事要表扬还需要写到推荐信里去？？？
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Aquaspirit 发表于 2013-3-9 13:35 static/image/common/back.gif
不要误解大家。你把这封信真拿去给德国人美国人英国人看看，你就明白了。
这封信的口气有非常大的问题 ...
欧经常和美国人讨论，NI，Matlab 的论坛基本不登录德国的。美国人发表意见的口吻比这封信严肃多了，都是对事不对人，语法不合的也多了，德国论坛上语法不合的不更多？欧国论坛呢，有几个语法正确的？单纯从文字游戏来嘲笑楼主能得到什么快感？
Dear Ms. Joniaux,
I am writing to you because Y, who is my wife, has recently finished an internship with xxxxx. And I hope you will read this email in detail because there are some things I would like to tell you regarding my wife’s reference letter.
Firstly, I appreciate very much that you gave Y the chance for this internship which Y really wished for to promote her experience as well as the time you have personally invested to guide her. I know my wife pretty well as well as her strengths and weaknesses and so I am able to judge her based on this.
Of course she showed me the reference letter you have prepared for her and – very honestly – I was very surprised what was standing in the letter. Just to let you know, I have worked in Europe and the US for banks and other companies and so I believe I have a certain experience to judge the quality of reference letters.
First of all I believe that the letter is far too short. I have received about 10 reference letters in my life so far and each one – including some from Blue Chip companies and investment banks – are all longer and much more detailed than the one you wrote for Y. The duties in the reference letter are not the same as in the sheet filled out for her school when she started the internship. And you have not written anything about Yuan’s performance – really nothing – but only about her social skills and definitely nothing about her hard skills. You don’t mention that her behavior was very good (That is at least a standard in EVERY Reference Letter) and also nothing about her language skills, in particular her ability to speak English on an advanced level.
I also want to tell you, that my wife will join me shortly in Germany to live here with me, but she will not able to use the reference letter due to the letter’s lack of clarity and structure, and hence Yuan will not be able to mention the internship in her CV because due to the structure of the current reference letter, all companies will believe something was wrong with Yuan during her internship – as you did not say anything about her hard skills and her overall performance. The format you used is also very uncommon for German companies and this all dramatically limits Yuan’s chances to find a job here and that is something I cannot accept to happen. Don’t understand me wrong. You have been her supervisor and we have no power to tell you what you should do or shouldn’t. But, honestly, I want to let you know that the reference letter you prepared upsets me. If you want I can send you a letter written about myself, where you can identify the difference between your and this letter?!?
According to what Yuan told me about her job, I believe she needed some weeks to fit into the job, but improved her performance during her stay and was able to work with XXXX’s (Excel) tools in the end. And Y stayed also long hours into the office to finish her work. But the reference letter says nothing about this and this stays completely unrewarded. In my view, you missed to describe this in the letter or in an evaluation of Yuan’s performance. For example by saying: “Y ’s overall performance was very good in the context of her duties” or something like this or that “she fulfilled completely our expectations”.
Hence I want to kindly ask you to think about the letter again and I hope this will eventually result in an adjustment of the reference letter by yourself. I recognized also that the first reference letter included some mistakes which must be corrected anyway. And we could combine this with you further elaborating on Yuan’s performance. This would be fair. The current letter is not fair at all in my view!
I hope you have read the email until here and we hope that you show some willingness to adjust the letter.
Sincerely,
XXXXX
拍个照哈。。。{:5_319:}
j坚决支持LZ，你们这些反对的家伙都是没脑子的!
LZ自己是一个弱女子，从肉体到心灵都很虚弱，当然智商可能也有点弱，那人家找自己爸来完全正常啊。
人家父亲爱护女儿，为女儿出头怎么了，有什么不对的吗!
LZ别担心，我永远顶你，希望你这辈子做实习都顺顺利利的。
我不是什么高级职员，一个小罗罗而已，这个信的文法，我也无法辨别，LG 是CIB的，VP，这个公司当年的发行BOND，也是找的我老公的公司，
我挺后悔为什么没有去 DWS，好歹是来往单位，
这楼主痛快的点在哪里？解恨还是高兴？挺不解的。
这封信有不少语法错误，而且为什么自己不能跟老板谈，要老公给老板写信？
不解加无语！